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How do words/actions motivate characters in David Brenner's "Fisheyes?"
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In David brenner's "fish eyes" his actions are motivated by the fact that his sister and his brother will prank him back if he pranks them
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ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fisheyes," David is motivated to prank his sister because she hit him in the head with a brick.
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DeleteIn David Benners's Fish eyes, actions motivate David to get revenge on Bib because she hits him with a brick which makes him want to get revenge and pull a prank on her.
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DeleteIn David Brenner's "Fisheyes" words and actions change the little boy because he always wants to get revenge on what he has been pranked on.
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DeleteIn David Brenner's story "Fisheyes" the main character David changes in the story from words and actions because of the abuse he and his sisters get from pranks they pull on each other.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's short non-fiction story "Fisheyes," David wants to prank his sister because he was going to win the stick ball game, but she hit him with a brick, so he wants to get her back.
ReplyDeleteDavid Brenner depicts how different pranks played on him changed him to a revengeful state.
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DeleteIn David Brenner's story "Fisheyes" David, also the author, is the main character and his siblings torture him to the point that he pulls a prank that his family will never forget.
ReplyDeleteIn the story "Fisheyes" by David Brenner words and actions motivate characters by making them want revenge or playing pranks on one another.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's essay "Fisheyes," David glues fisheyes to his head because his sister hits him in the head with a brick.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fish Eyes" words and actions motivate the main character of the story to scare his little sister with fish eyes because his little sister threw a brick at his head.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "fish eyes" actions give people a motive because David scares his sister for hitting him with a brick.
ReplyDeleteIn "Fish Eyes" By David Brenner he creates a story on how actions change David because him and his siblings play pranks and haze each other.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fish eyes" the words and actions of David's sister motivate David because his sister throws a brick at him, it motivates him to do his fish eye prank.
ReplyDeleteDuring David Brenner's "Fish Eyes", characters such as David himself change because of his brother's and sister's pranks that turn him into a young devious criminal with no end to the jokes.
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ReplyDeleteIn the shorty story " Fisheyes" David it determined to get at his sister because she hit him in the back of the head with a brick.
ReplyDeleteDavid Brenner's "Fish Eyes," shows David scaring and prancing his older sister, Bib with a pair of fish eye because the act of her attacking him with a brick made his seek revenge.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fisheyes" Davids actions are motivated by his sister hitting his head with a brick and his need for vengeance after being pranked.
ReplyDeleteIn In David Brenner's "Fisheyes" words and actions change David because he always seeks revenge on his older siblings whenever they prank him.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fisheyes" the main character David pulls pranks on his siblings in retaliation to his sibling's pranks on him.
ReplyDeleteIn "Fisheyes" by David Brenner actions motivate characters to retaliate to one other because of pranks that caused each other to plan revenge on one another
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fisheyes" actions motivate characters by making them want revenge, like when Davids sister threw a brick at him David wanted revenge so he did the fisheyes prank.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's "Fisheyes," David becomes more clever because his brother offers him a "delicious" drink and he is stimulated to plot a scheme against him by dropping carrot juice in his milk.
ReplyDeleteIn David Brenner's fish eyes, David is changed by his sisters actions ( hitting him in the head with a brick), he glues fish eyes to his head.
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